Never Say Never - Kelly Mooney There were a couple of things that didn't work for me with this story. First, was the multi POVs. They switched way too frequently. I couldn't feel anything for either character and the rapid change and sometimes repetitive scenes were left under developed. Also, there were errors with the "tenses". Mid paragraph, the character would go from speaking in first person present tense to first past. I ended up quitting before reading it all.