Mountain Song - Ruby Laska The general idea for the story was OK. The editing was bad. (Is it just me or are the majority of books I'm reading not even edited anymore? I should start an online business. For ten bucks, I will read/edit your ebook BEFORE you put it out there for the world - since your current publisher/editor is full of suck.) Other than that. The usual lack of communication and misunderstandings made this story just so-so. Nothing original.